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| − | |Review text en=Luh ayu Manik Mas, Tresna ring Alas(Love the Forrest) | + | |Review text id=Luh Ayu Manik Mas, Tresna ring Alas |
| − | Written by: I Made Sugianto
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| − | Reading the story is like being brought into the story "The Famous Five" (known as "Lima Sekawan" in Bahasa) and the American Wonder Woman hidimg her true identity while saving people's days. The story will also get you unpleasant feeling for such kind of embarrassment about how weak the law enforcement in our country is. And yet, the story also tells us about sincerity, friendship, and kindness of a person that we consider as a hero.
| + | Setelah ujian tengah semester, Luh Ayu Manik dan temannya kemah ke tepi pantai. Namun cuaca kurang bagus. Hujan dan petir melanda. Bahkan air di sungai meluap kebanjiran. Rupanya, banjir itu terjadi akibat penebangan hutan oleh warga di pegunungan. |
| − | The story began with the scene of the main Character having vacation with her friends by a beach, Luh Ayu Manik (an eigth grader student who occasionally changed into a heroine with a golden crown). While they were enjoying time, suddenly hard rain came and forced them to shelter in "wantilan" around the area. That gave Ayu Manik a chance to check her instagram and found out that there had been a flood. Seeing the news Ayu manik was saddened and wondering what might cause the flood. She was convinced that the cause was the deforrestation. When she told her friends about it they had an idea to plant trees to help the forrest be normal again.
| + | Luh Ayu Manik dan temannya bermaksud melakukan reboisasi. Ketika sampai di hutan, semua terkejut melihat hutan yang sudah gundul dan semuanya sigap bekerja menanam pohon. Semua pohon sudah ditanam dan mereka berkomitmen untuk lebih sering mendaki gunung untuk merawat pohon yang sudah ditanam. |
| − | On the day the promised, they went uphill brought many trees to plant. When they got to the forest, to their surprise they found that it has been destroyed leaving wooden logs scattered. The scene got them angry and yet sad at the same time. Luh Ayu Manik then think they can find who logging the forrest ilegaly. So she went to the forest once again to gather evidence about the ilegal logging to be reported to the police. But unfortunately, their plan didn't go as expected since Ayu Manik forgot her phone at home and her friend's phone was out of battery. But they managed to remember the faces of the criminals. They rushed to report to the police but the police refused to believe them. Almost hopelessly Ayu manik and her friends planning a prank to catch the ilegal loggers. One of them would disguise as "Rangda" (the demonic form of Durgha Shiva's Sakti). But once again it didn't work as planned, in the critical situation that would harm her friends, Ayu Manik changed into her hero form Luh ayu Manik Mas and saved her friends. At the end the problem could be resolved. Everyone was happy.
| + | Dalam benaknya, Luh Ayu Manik mempunyai rencana untuk menyusup ke hutan untuk mengetahui siapa sesunggguhnya yang telah melakukan penebangan hutan hingga gundul seperti sekarang ini. Rencana tersebut dilaksanakan oleh Luh Ayu Manik bersama Luh Putu Suastini. Mereka pergi ke hutan dan mereka melihat ada orang yang sedang menebang pohon. Mereka melaporkannya cepat-cepat. Tapi sayang, laporan Luh Ayu Manik bersama Luh Putu Suastini dianggap bohong oleh polisi karena tanpa bukti. |
| | + | Luh Ayu Manik dan temannya tidak patah semangat. Salah satu teman Luh Ayu Manik Mas, Made Anjasmara mempunyai usul untuk menakut-nakuti si penjahat dengan topeng rangda. Dan mereka akhirnya berangkat naik gunung untuk melaksanakan rencananya itu. Awalnya tindakan Luh Ayu Manik dan temannya tampak memberikan hasil. Namun pada tindakan berikutnya malah teman Luh Ayu Manik yang menjadi kejaran penjahat dan bahkan mau menghabisinya dengan gergaji mesin. Melihat temannya kepepet seperti itu, dengan cepat akhirnya Luh Ayu Manik mencari tempat sepi untuk berubah wujud menjadi wanita cantik yang bermahkota emas dan dengan cepat pula menolong temannya yang sedang diserang oleh para penjahat. Dan para penjahat berhasil ditangkap. |
| | + | Luh Ayu Manik segera menelepon pihak kepolisian agar para penjahat dibawa ke kantor polisi. Akhirnya, karena keberhasilannya membekuk para penjahat itu, Luh Ayu Manik dan teman-temannya disebut sebagai pahlawan lingkungan. |
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| − | One thing I like the most about the story is that it carried a great sense of humor, the story is so fun that will give us various feelings. On the other hand it also teaches us hope that the good side will always win. Enjoy reading.
| + | Kelebihan dan Kekurangan buku : |
| − | |Reviewed by=Juli Artini | + | Kisah ini sangat menarik untuk dibaca karena perilaku tokoh Luh Ayu Manik dapat memberikan keteladanan bagi anak-anak muda agar selalu menjaga dan melestarikan lingkungan. Cerita juga disajikan dengan bahasa yang komunikatif sehingga mudah dimengerti. Di samping itu, dengan ilustrasi gambar-gambar, pembaca akan terasa terbantu dalam memahami isi cerita. |
| | + | Dari segi ejaan, buku ini hampir sempurna. Hanya ada kesalahan kecil saja terutama pada pemenggalan kata di akhir baris. |
| | + | Misalnya : |
| | + | Kata "Fot-" di akhir baris yang semestinya "Fo-" dan diikuti oleh kata "tonya akan diserahkan kepada polisi" karena pemenggalan yang baku untuk kata foto adalah "fo-to" bukan "fot-o" (halaman 18, versi tiga bahasa) |
| | + | |Reviewed by=I Nyoman Swadra |
| | |Reviewed nationality=Indonesian | | |Reviewed nationality=Indonesian |
| | |Reviewer lives=Tabanan, Bali | | |Reviewer lives=Tabanan, Bali |
| | |Review year=2020 | | |Review year=2020 |
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| − | |Flipbook page contents=penulis ingin menyampaikan pesan kepada pembaca mengenai pentingnya menjaga lingkungan hidup. melalui tokoh Luh Ayu Manik, penulis memberikan gambaran salah satu cara kita untuk melestarikan hutan, memperbaiki kondisi hutan, dan ikut serta mengawasi perlindungan hutan.
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| − | |Flipbook page contents=The author delivers the message on how to save the environment through this interesting story. Taken from a daily real activity that could be happened to teenagers, the author brings this matter in such a way. The plot runs smoothly. It started when Luh Ayu Manik and her friends went camping. At first, they were so excited but then suddenly the weather turned into nightmare. The author described Luh Ayu Manik as a caring person, sincere, a tough and responsible girl. She warned her friends not to stay close to the seaside. Among her friends, she could deal with one of her friends who has a traumatic experience. The author also described Luh Ayu Manik as a millennial girl who loves to check Instagram in killing her time. By stalking the Instagram, she got up to date information or news about what happened surround her. She found out that a large flood and a bridge that had been washed away by devastating rains. Then she told her friends about the matter and came up with the idea of replanting trees on the other day. When they wanted to climb the mountain. The boys brought shovels, hoes whilst the girls brought trees to plant. They were so excited and sang along the way to the mountain but then they found out that the forest had been devastated. Feeling disappointed of the forest ranger’s work who could not be able to do his job well, they still planted the trees. Luh Ayu Manik suggested her friends to hike up the mountains more often to keep the trees alive. But then when she came back home, she kept thinking why the forest was unprotected. Then she wanted to enter the forest and investigated the matter. She came up with the idea to take picture as an evidence for the police report. But her friend ruined everything. They ran of batteries when they saw the thief, because her friend took too much selfies along the way. But she still insisted to report to the police without any proof just only telling the thief’s appearance and of course, it didn’t work. The police refused to investigate this matter without any evidences. Then the silly thing happened when Luh Ayu Manik belief the idea of Made Anjasmara to use the mask of Rangda in order to scare the thief. This also didn’t work. Instead of being afraid, the thief fought back and finally, Luh Ayu Manik transformed into a super heroine Luh Ayu Manik Mas and saved the day. The story has a strong moral value how people should protect the environment to save the world. Moreover, the author puts a strong character development of Luh Ayu Manik.
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| − | |Flipbook page contents=The author delivers the message on how to save the environment through this interesting story. Taken from a daily real activity that could be happened to teenagers, the author brings this matter in such a way. The plot runs smoothly. It started when Luh Ayu Manik and her friends went camping. At first, they were so excited but then suddenly the weather turned into nightmare. The author described Luh Ayu Manik as a caring person, sincere, a tough and responsible girl. She warned her friends not to stay close to the seaside. Among her friends, she could deal with one of her friends who has a traumatic experience. The author also described Luh Ayu Manik as a millennial girl who loves to check Instagram in killing her time. By stalking the Instagram, she got up to date information or news about what happened surround her. She found out that a large flood and a bridge that had been washed away by devastating rains. Then she told her friends about the matter and came up with the idea of replanting trees on the other day. When they wanted to climb the mountain. The boys brought shovels, hoes whilst the girls brought trees to plant. They were so excited and sang along the way to the mountain but then they found out that the forest had been devastated. Feeling disappointed of the forest ranger’s work who could not be able to do his job well, they still planted the trees. Luh Ayu Manik suggested her friends to hike up the mountains more often to keep the trees alive. But then when she came back home, she kept thinking why the forest was unprotected. Then she wanted to enter the forest and investigated the matter. She came up with the idea to take picture as an evidence for the police report. But her friend ruined everything. They ran of batteries when they saw the thief, because her friend took too much selfies along the way. But she still insisted to report to the police without any proof just only telling the thief’s appearance and of course, it didn’t work. The police refused to investigate this matter without any evidences. Then the silly thing happened when Luh Ayu Manik belief the idea of Made Anjasmara to use the mask of Rangda in order to scare the thief. This also didn’t work. Instead of being afraid, the thief fought back and finally, Luh Ayu Manik transformed into a super heroine Luh Ayu Manik Mas and saved the day. The story has a strong moral value how people should protect the environment to save the world. Moreover, the author puts a strong character development of Luh Ayu Manik.
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